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Friday 5th March

LO: Write the descriptive story: My journey.


Put the paragraphs from this week together to tell the story of this special cloud's journey. You will describe your journey in the same order as the video. You can add an ending with the rain and reveal the fact that you are a cloud at the very end of the story.


You can use the cloud story below to help you write about the journey. There are some sentences on the first couple of pictures to give you ideas on how you could start the story.

Use the word bank to help you include some sentence starters ( fronted adverbials) and use it to improve your vocabulary choices.